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Rip Out My Heart

Here I am alone in this apartment...
I'm here stuck in this small compartment.
Finally you have spoken...
Stating your heart someone else has stolen.
Silence on the telephone I throw against the wall!..
I can't believe this, not at all!
If you're going to leave I ask of you...
For a simple favor I need you to do.
Rip out my heart...
Before the pain starts.
If at the end your choice is to go...
And if you don't want me follow.
Then just rip it right out...
Don't let it hang about!
My dear love what is going on?..
Suddenly why am I not the chosen one?
Explain the situation and what is wrong...
This problem has my mind playing a game of ping-pong.
I think there must be someone else in between...
Just tell me what it is and come at me clean.
Once more there is silence on the telephone again...
Against the very wall is where I send it!
The walls are quickly closing in...
This battle I think I won't win!
If that is your decision all this will bring...
The main reason I ask you for just this one thing.
Rip out my heart...
Before it completely falls apart.
Just rip out my very life...
This is cutting me like a knife!
As here I will wait like dusted sands...
For my life is in your hands.

Sometimes you just can't live without that special someone.

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  • Dear Cristian

    Amazing poem. I could never rip someone's heart out just like i have a hard time hurting someone. When i do hurt someone it feels like my heart is breaking. Again my amazing writer.

    Always
    ~Amazing Angel~


    • Climax gold member
      May 29
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      Remember the Grim Reaper poem I have..!

      *LOL!*
  • It usually pisses me off when the beats per line dont match, but for some reason, you make it work!! Usually the fact the beats dont match takes away from the poem but this time it didnt!! well done

    Mylee
  • i like

  • judy011
    May 7
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    wow very amazing poem thats very deep love there


    • Climax gold member
      May 7
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      You are so lovely. Thank you princess! Love you lots!
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