Nothing to fear
Don’t shed a tear
I’ll make it right
Let’s turn off the light
Welcome
To
MY
WORLD
Author notes
Picture - 'Welcome' by Empatia. (Deviantart)
Option 1
In a list
A contest entry
- OPTIONS - Come and see!!!! PW ARE ALLOWED - by mystic-angel.
900 points, ended May 19, 2008, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Nice dark write. Very creepy! Thanks for your entry. Good luck!
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Oh I loved this one!
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Chills
Creepiness factor above bar. Excellent write.
Best of luck, and thank you for taking your time in an entry into my contest, it is truly appreciated. -
Now this I love, and you knew that didn't you Sue? Heheh. I too was drawn in and kept in. It is sublime, evil, dark incarnate and it should WIN!!
Well done
Wayne Leon
xx
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Your words drew me in
with the promise of sin
I have no fear
that's why I'm here
To wallow in your world
Short, sweet, special. as ever
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Holy heck that picture is scary... and your write freak me out as well!! hehe
Awesome.. well done Sue
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Pardon, Sue.....but your dark side is showing. Well done!
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A bit different. But very good. Nice and spooky! Good luck in the contest!
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Ah! Short, sweet and spooky! I knew Jeff would comment in rhyme. Yours is better.
Love,
Amera♥
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keep the light on nice and comact xx good luck
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A creepy rhyme
Dropped out of time
And late each night
Far from the light
The world you're in is MINE!!!
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ok that is just downright creepy 0_0
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