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Fulfilling


Fulfillment around me
Pleasure in the heart
Love is plentiful to see
Content from the start

Wife’s unconditional dedication
Teen’s unfathomable caliber
Dog’s unashamed determination
Could there be a reason to be somber?


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  • queen Greeters member
    May 12
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    WELCOME TO ALL POETRY

    I like this poem a lot,

    Barbara
    Site Greeter


  • CookieZeal Greeters member
    May 7

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    Hi there.
    Well, I see this has some wisdom layered in nearly each line. The form, brevity, and rhyme make it quite interesteing to read.

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    Were this mine, I'd choose a different word at the end so that it does not read 'forced'.

    Otherwise, this would make a great relational anthem for a poster.

    Good one. Thank you and welcome to the site !