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Brian's Eyes

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My precious grandson,
I look at you and I can't help but smile
You have your Daddy's eyes...
Eyes full of love, trust, and sweet innocence
Mesmerizing eyes...

When I look at you,
I look at love;
I am thankful God placed you into our family...
My heart bursts with love for you!


You are a precious gift
and I adore you with all my heart
I love you,
Grandma

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Prompt: Mesmerizing Eyes

In loving dedication to my precious grandson, Brian Bair...I love you, baby!
~Grandma~

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  • Bob Fox
    November 23
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    Smiles

    For as I read this wonderful write and look at that fine looking little guy i also see my Grandson. And the joy and love I feel is overwhelming. Again a wonderful write poet.


  • Aalta silver member
    November 18
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    Firstly your grandson is really cute
    very beautiful dedication... I love it...

    Thank you for sharing this with me...
    All the best

    -Aalta


  • StarEyes
    July 29

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    Those eyes are mesmerizing! What a little cutie. As far as this write, well, it is beautiful! And who better to dedicate a poem too, than that precious grand baby? Great job!!!!

    I will have the lair back on track this weekend, now that things are settling down.

    Thanks for sharing this in the lair.

    Congrats on the bronze!

    and love

    Nyetta

  • Bob 42 silver member
    July 29

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    Congratulations

    I am sure your grandson is a handsome boy
    Easiest way to smile, start with a squint
    For with your readers eyes, you should not toy
    Lighter blue paper before you do print


  • cazzy71
    July 25
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    so gorgeous

    This poem is so gorgeous,I love it.Thank you.


  • Nostalgic Moon
    August 26, 2008

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    this is beautiful!
    I love it, very touching!
    best of luck!


  • just weak hands
    August 9, 2008

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    Touching

    ah very touching :] any grandson would be grateful to have such a loving grandmother like you :]

    good luck in my contest !


  • penman gold member
    July 9, 2008
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    Beautiful

    Such a touching and loving poem. What a precious creation for your grandson.


  • Lionsloves Lair
    May 11, 2008
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    Lionsloves Lair...


  • -LilacThOughts- gold member
    May 11, 2008

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    9pts...

    Thank you for contributing this wonderful piece to the Lionsloves Lair's reading list

    ~Lilac


  • jasminerose
    May 9, 2008
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    Thank you so very much for entering!!
    Jasminerose


  • ckwriter69
    May 8, 2008

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    awww grand kids are great. I have two grandsons and a granddaughter and they are so much fun to be around. They are precious and they love their papa as they call me. Thanks for sharing and keep writing.


  • Desire gold member
    May 8, 2008

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    Precious!!

    Aaaaaaaaaaaaw he is Precious and when I look at his picture...can't help but smile
    He is a Gem!!
    Love this!! Wahoooooooooooooooooooo

    Someday my munchkins will have munchkins of their own...sigh~~~
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~

  • Bob 42 silver member
    May 7, 2008
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    I`m sure he`s a treasure

    My sister was born with Mother`s blue eyes
    In a few days they turned, to our Dad`s brown
    Mom was disappointed but she was wise
    Parading my sister all over town.


  • Merry Christmas
    May 7, 2008

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    I hope that he never loses that love,trust and innocence that he holds in his eyes, it would be a terrible loss I am sure. I liked this poem and now I find myself wishing I had such mesmerizing eyes


  • poeticweaver gold member
    May 7, 2008

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    Precious.

    All heart and soul sweet sis!
    Much love and light, thanks for sharing.

    Bro Timothy

  • StarEyes
    May 7, 2008
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    Very true!!! Logan's eyes, just like his daddy, big, beautiful blue eyes! Isn't it amazing what love and trust their eyes hold? I am sure Brian will cherish this in years to come!!

    Best of luck in this contest honey!

    and love

    Nyetta


  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    May 7, 2008

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    OMG ~~~ do I know this feeling.
    Nothing like a grandchild.
    There's no words to explain the love you truly feel for them.
    That are a ray of sunshins on cloudy days.
    They touch you heart like no one else can.
    It is true that in their eyes you'll find innocence,
    and prue joy.
    Bless you and your grandchild and family.

    loveandblessings2u & yours always
    Joyce


  • poet2angels gold member
    May 7, 2008

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    Oh, how I do know that feeling...A grandson or granddaughter will steal your heart everytime...

    Beautiful, SIs!

    Lynda


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    May 7, 2008

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    awe! I just love this...Mesmerizing eyes they do all have for sure...just have to love our grandchildren niaish so much for sharing yours with me

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