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endless


burn without remorse
seek the limit of dark sky
reach with endurance
capture my sight with your play
ashes will tell your story

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tanka

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  • BluesMan gold member
    May 7, 2008
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    Excelent take on the Pic. I enjoyed reading this


  • Samplette gold member
    May 7, 2008

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    Nicely crafted tanka. Very well written. I think the form is perfect. Thank you for entering the contest.
    Sam