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Bringing Down Our Bridge

Bringing down our bridge
I sit and wait for you
waiting on a solid ridge.

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A contest entry

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  • raggyann
    June 8, 2008
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    short and i know what you mean
    glad you won on this one


  • delightfulmess silver member
    May 7, 2008

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    OUTSTANDING!!! Love the take. Thank you for entering my contest.


    Delila


  • demonheart
    May 7, 2008
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    this is amazing piece so few words yet so full of emotion