I am willing to go places others would balk at
I'll do headstands that will make you tremble.
I'm the biggest dare-devil around anybody's town.
I'll dart between the Queen, princess, or clown.
I take 'fun' to the height of captivation's lair.
I like to laugh often, and I'll find a way to do it.
I will dream, but then I'll pay the cost; whatever.
This sets me somewhat apart because too many won't.
The biggest thing that separates me from others...
is I don't settle, I want the best across the board.
And, I don't mind paying the price to accomplish this,
I don't mind the length of time it takes, not a problem.
How many people would stay on a ship that long?
And tackle weakness when they're not very strong?
Or, sing a song even though it takes their breath away?
And still dream on - no matter what gets in their way?
Author notes
Tell me what makes you unique.
A contest entry
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'I like to laugh often, and I'll find a way do it.' - there is a word missing there, but other than that, thank you ... have to agree, I too am quite a diehard - the more difficult it is to get it, the better challenged I am
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Thank you so much for the HM and for the correction-smile-I appreciate both lol
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nice
nice playful write for the prompt . . liked "I'll do headstands that will make you tremble" and "This sets me somewhat apart because too many won't" . . good luck in the contest
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Thank you so much
lol
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you are on a roll pat
stay on the ship captain and dance along the boards with a hearty laugh, let the waves carry you along


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Amen
lol
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