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Longing

Come to me quick
With your bulging brown eyes.
Come to me quick
With your little boy smile.
Come to me quick
For it's true that time flies.
Come to me quick
If for just a short while.

Love, make me sick
Of your sweet rambling tone.
Love, make me sick
Of your curls 'round each ear.
Love, make me sick
Of the love I have known.
Love, make me sick
Of entreating you near.

Time, how it ticks.
Will you give me your mind?
Time, how it ticks.
Will you give me your heart?
Time, how it ticks.
And how love makes me blind.
Time, how it ticks!
Are we still yet apart?

Come to me quick
With your bulging brown eyes.
Come to me quick
With your little boy smile.
Come to me quick
For it's true that time flies.
Come to me quick
If for just a short while.

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  • Deceits Tears silver member
    May 9, 2008

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    This Is a crisp little piece and a joy to read,
    Thankyou for your entry
    Good Luck In the contest

  • Eusebius
    May 7, 2008
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    Neat, nifty, gnarly, and different for you, well done as per usual....


  • SomeoneBearyDear silver member
    May 7, 2008
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    I think good rhyme

    I've see you've found your inspiriation in "eyes" today. Your pretty prolific today. Any insights?