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At the End of the Day (Limerick)

She wanted a poem on my vices
with limericks as the devices.
Just give me a brew
and a cigarette too
and a day that is free from all crisis.

Author notes

I thought I'd try at least one clean one (LOL)
Picture Credit: http://soraya-beatris.deviantart.com/art/Cigarettes-and-Beer-51143722

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 7, 2008

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    lol... hey... can you get me one of those days too?? hehe

    You are just brilliant at these!


  • Lucy.
    May 7, 2008
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    Nice and clean! Perfect pic too, thanks Ken


  • C.I.M.A Punk
    May 7, 2008
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    It's a nice limerick with good rhyming and a good story.
    Well done!


    • KayJay
      May 7, 2008
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      Thank you sir... I appreciate the kind comments..
      Ken


  • Erozay
    May 7, 2008

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    lol I loved this poem and normally i hate short poems but this one is just wonderful and funny how did you think of it and worse i like it and dont smoke or drink 0_0 lol your poems great though hope you write some more


    • KayJay
      May 7, 2008
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      Thank you for your kind comment... I didn't "think of it" - I live it (LOL)
      Ken


      • Erozay
        May 7, 2008
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        ohhj that isnt healthy but like people say you do only live once so i wont critize as if i would anyway =)

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