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Spiders

Spooky 6 legged creature creeping up my bed.
Please go away oh lord he's climbing up my leg.
Its all a dream let me wake up its at my knees.
Darn it someone please get it off of me.
Even i dont deserve this fate oh no its to late.
Ready to scream i wake up from my dream.
Spooky spider still on my bed and im screaming off my head.

im having a writers block month so yeah

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  • KayJay
    May 7, 2008

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    Very humorous... I could tell you to embrace your fear but somehow I don't think you're going to get past the creepy feeling of him crawling up your leg (LOL)... Well done!
    K


  • The Cube
    May 7, 2008
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    Funny. Except spiders have 8 legs