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This is an ending, for me.

Did I take the chances,
without second glances,
to make a positive mark on you?  

Or did I fear to tread,
with God aweful dread,
upon a path that would uplift you?

Did I boldly proceed,
After wise councel did head,
And provide direction to win the day?

Or did I stick to the sure
And my time just endure
Wasting it all with nothing to say?

A new beginning you'll see,
But a bittersweet ending for me,
As I quietly walk away fromt the stage.

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A pensive mood... just wanted to preserve this one for the time being. Not so interested in comments, but thanks just the same.

Cheers,
Michael

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  • Sandygram silver member
    May 8

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    Best Of luck my friend. When one door closes another always opens. I am sure God has wonderful things in store for you yet. Only Pete knows for sure.

    Bless You,
    Sandy

  • Pensive mood hhmmm!!! I know you aren't interested in comments, but knowing me, I do what I want - so I shall comment ....Nicely written heartfelt poem. I hope everything is okay... I love the ending - as if someone is leaving life but just wonders one more time, if he/she has lived up to the mark.... very well said... now if we could think everyday like this, we might not have to wonder at the end atleast that's my 2cents ... As always enjoy reading your work... Keep it coming stranger... take care CIG