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life

life can be
shallow and empty
lonely and miserable
long and joyous

the great thing about life
is you get to choose how you wish to live
who you love, how you love
how long your here on earth
weather you have life after this

i pray that all of you
have lives that you are proud of
and that you are happy in all that you do
this is my wish for you life

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  • AngelEyes13
    May 7, 2008

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    Wow, I like this write, it makes you stop and look back at your life. Great job. P.S. Missed you in school!


  • Kelli Marie
    May 7, 2008
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    First of all, I almost didn't take the time to read this. The font is impossible to read as is. I highlighted it, but won't bother next time. This is a very nice write, and I am glad I did. I hope you fix it by final judging. Thank you for sharing.
    Kelli