You say you want to tear me down,
Well then do it sweetheart,
Because I'm sitting here,
Waiting,
For you to start this war,
So I can finish it.
I won't let you take me over,
You can't instill the fear into me.
Just try to knock me out just once,
And honey you will see.
You'll be sorry you ever messed with me.
I can promise that,
Because I won't back down,
It's not happing darling,
So make me fall to the ground.
If you want to hurt me here I am,
I'm not running away,
So get it over today.
Author notes
I hate whenever people say they're going to do something when obviously they aren't, it's pointless, they're just trying to instill fear into you, and those are the weakest people to tell you the truth, they try to feed off your fear, and if you don't want them around, don't show fear towards them, and they will soon see they'll have to get to you some other way.
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Comments
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love it and i know what you mean...keep on speaking your mind!
peace, love, 7 cheese -
fave part this would be an awesome song hehe and i love the structure
You'll be sorry you ever messed with me.
I can promise that,
Because I won't back down,
It's not happing darling,
So make me fall to the ground -
Oh snap! This is "Here I am and if you don't liek it tough" piece. nicely done. I envy people who can write these, and write them well. Nice write here. Inspirational, and heartfelt. I hope to see more of these from you soon.
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A gutsy piece good luck
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