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Silent Confession 5/5/08

Whisper in the dark
Secrets of the heart
Truths left untold
Lies that begin to unfold

Emotions that hide
Silently she sighed
With the slightest move of her lips
Slowly the barely uttered truth slips

Memories replay in her mind
Reliving the moment she'll find
She can still feel his loving touch
She remembers what she misses so much

But some how she's okay
She watches silently as he goes on his way
Understanding but not knowing how
She stands alone not long lost without him now.

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written 5/5/08

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  • tears o rain
    June 14, 2008
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    wow

    This is a beautiful poem...


  • sassykitty
    June 11, 2008

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    this is excellent and I'm very impressed by the use of rhyme (something I just cannot do myself!)I really liked the imagery and the tone you use encapsulates the mood very effectively. Nice, heartfelt write, thanks for sharing.


    • XXx.A.N.G.E.L.xXx
      June 11, 2008
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      Thank you...I'm glad you liked my poem...although I write for the soul purpose to express emotions it is always good to hear that some one enjoyed it...

  • Twilight Panther Moderators member
    May 12, 2008

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    such heart breaking words you have penned...to love and to have lost leaves the heart shattered into tiny little pieces...so alone and lost without him...sighs...written just beautifully...niaish little one for sharing with me


  • Kirke
    May 7, 2008
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    Very moving. I love this poem.

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