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Dream World

I went to bed last night and woke up with a freight.
I woke up in a world so new.
On a ship with a very big crew.

I asked the captain where were headed.
He replied "Were going to a place unknown".
A crewman said "With riches untold".

I asked "May I go with, I don't want to be alone"?
I felt a breeze of wind that froze my blood cold.
I looked down and saw I was wearing a gown.
I asked the captain "Can we stop by a town"?

He then said"We are to far out".
Something swept across my feet and I gave a big shout.
I noticed it was just a big cat.
I looked around and noticed the crew was mostly fat.
I went over and on a chair sat.

When everyone went to their quarters for sleep.
I stepped outside for a little peek.
I stood up against the side of the ship.
I took a wiff and almost grew sick.
I ship started to rock and I slipped cause
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  • I will read it when it is finished
    no hurry; plenty of time to work and edit