I hate that I love you.
I hate the way you tilt your head when you smile.
I hate the way you try to make me feel happy when I'm sad.
I hate the fact that you love me.
I hate the way you play around.
I hate it when you play with my hair.
I hate the way you kiss me.
I hate it when you hold me in your arms.
I hate it when you touch me and even worse when you caress me.
I hate it when you love me but even worse when you hate me.
why do I hate these things about you?
A contest entry
- Truth.. Quote Prompt.. by Angelflower.
713 points, ended May 25, 2008, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Redo To Ten Things I Hate About You
Comments
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This is a very great write..
Many I'm sure can relate to this.
You did a wonderful job.. So much emotion..
Bravo.. Thank you for sharing..
Best of luck..
Angel
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Great use of simple and uncomplicated words and language. Thank you for sharing and best wishes to you in all of your endeavors. Keep that pen handy and ever ready for use dear poet.
♥ Touchof1der -
We love to hate and hate to love, age old saying so I've heard. Great write, good luck
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I hate when you hate me.
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