The absence of the choice and hope
Means only one thing – your vision
Is aberrated by the blinders you grope
In collision with own destiny and wrong decision
Has led you to the dead end.
The burden of the grieves
That make you bend
Are jogs that you receive
To change the trend
Of the events mislead
By blindness you can end
By changing sled
Direction from down to the up.
Of course you’ll need the effort which
Overcomes disrupt
Of reference system switch.
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The burden of the grieves
That make you bend
Are jogs that you receive
To change the trend
Of the events mislead
By blindness you can end
This hit home the most ... thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest ...
Chantelle -
the ups and downs and all the in betweens...the absence of choice and hope, is hopelessness...your are powerful and thought provoking. Thank you for sharing my friend
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