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bother

tiny pee shooters
firing endlessly at hooters
bouncing every which way
stinging constant till you say

HEY
END
THIS
TODAY!

 

 

Author notes

this is not a true story, but it is a feeling i have had. so i tried to make it short and sweet.

would you through a fit?

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  • psychedelichippie
    May 7, 2008
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    Awkward...

    It's good, creepy, but good


  • Cube
    May 7, 2008
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    Alrighty then. I don't think I'd do anything like that to you though.


    • Deathless1
      May 7, 2008
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      i would hope not, and you know you would get punched in the face.