Triangles of Love..
Have you been there?
I have...
and Its hard living a lie...
The sex is not as meaninflul
As you feel guilty.
But once you've found the truest,
Love has no limits
For true love...
Expressed witout the lies,
Becomes an adventure in ectasy...
And how sweet it is...
Be it romance by candlelight
On a beach
Or by a waterfall...
The day or night is captivating
Despite the way its done
and
The final climax..
Well..
Fantasize...
and
Experience it!
Dragonheart1
Author notes
I' over the 15 line limit, but Ihad to build a story first and then use your prompt as the ending!
A contest entry
- Quickie; 10 poets, 15 lines, picture/quote prompt-- ENTER NOW by perfectsunset.
450 points, ended May 20, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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excellent
so true are the words you have written. love like the one you speak of is a rare and beautiful find. if you find it in life, never let it go for it is a beautiful and magical thing. nicely done!!
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very true...triangles of love its hard . thanks for remind it again
success in your contest
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Your words came together beautifully in this piece. I like where you took the prompt, it brought back memories for me. Only thing I have to say is I noticed a few small grammar errors, just going to let you know so you can fix them because sometimes it can be distracting to read;
"Expressed witout the lies" = witHout
"Be it roamnce by candlelight" = romance
"On a a beach" = just one a
"The day or night it captiating" = captivating
"Fantacize" = Fantasize
Other than that, this was wonderfully done!! I just wanted to be of help that's all, don't take it as a bad thing, just helping you out. Thanks so much for your lovely entry & best of luck
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Yep.. a triangle is never much fun really is it!! Again your words of true love are inspiring! How wonderful to actually have that!
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