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Beautiful

With you in a russet wood
under sheaths of misted gold

A summer breeze as warm as breath
With the sweetness of baby pines

Our fingers intertwine, beautiful

Laying together in caressing grasses
Amoung the daisies and the clover

I stare at you, words can't describe
We are alone at last, and all is quiet

Your lips meet mine, beautiful



A contest entry

Yeah, kinda my fantasy ^_^

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  • Perception
    May 7, 2008

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    Oh wow... This IS beautiful! I love it...
    Great job
    best of luck in the contest hehe