A two line preview
To see what the day will be like
Before we go into the battle
To fight the woeful fight
The war all begins
When the morning bell rises
The pushing and shoving
Everyone with their disguises
Growning into different rooms
This is where the battle blooms
Words being thrown
Like daggers for no reason
If you say something
People don't like
It's treated like it's treason
The lone horseback
Will cover more ground
But fighting along side others
Just is not allowed
It is better to have
Less thunder in your mouth
And more lightning in your hand
Even if this means
Your group
Your friends
You must disband
The lesson is learnt
Todays war is done
Tomorrow we'll start again
Just like the day begun
Tell me what you think, I really do want some honest feedback
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Hummmm According to the school filter, this didn't actually post, ermmm Okay then, ermm how can I improve it?
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