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An insomnia driven nightmare

I lay awake again.
My mind continues to run.
Thinking of what I know,
or think I know.
I want sleep the most of all.
I guess it is true,
that people always want
that which they cannot have.

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I hate it when people say "I'll sleep enough when I'm dead" because they don't know what years without restfull sleep are like

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  • Angelflower
    May 24, 2008

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    I know how that feels!!!
    and people that say that frustrate the heck out of me.. I have always been like this.. Ever since I was a baby.. I think I made my dad into one actually..lol. poor thing..
    You did a great job.. thank you for sharing, and best of luck..

    Angel


  • Touchof1der silver member
    May 20, 2008

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    In our home we have been known as The House of Insomniacs... literally. I truly know what you speak of here and understand it well. Thank you for sharing and best wishes to you in all of your endeavors. Keep that pen handy and ever ready for use dear poet.
    ♥ Touchof1der


    • Burnt-Angel
      May 20, 2008
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      i am the only one in my family who has it, so ive learned to enjoy my own company more than the company of others


  • Fearful - Death
    May 12, 2008
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    Nicely Written
    Sucks To Be Insomiac, Don't It? Lol


  • LadyDementia gold member
    May 7, 2008

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    OOohh, not good. I have been there, nights of looking at the ceiling for hours on end...my son has it something terrible. I do feel for you, hope it eases soon. Fab poem, good luck


  • thearmsofsorrow
    May 7, 2008

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    wow haha i feel your pain on the insomniac thing
    whenever i have an episode i go days on end without any sleep whatsoever
    just cant
    nicely phrased


    • Burnt-Angel
      May 7, 2008
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      thanks I hate it because the only time I can think clearly is when I drink energy drinks, like tonight,

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