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Bi polar fun times

Up and down
Around, to the right, to the left
Spinning in circles
Always circles
The pendulum swings
Brings a smile to my face
And tears to my eyes
Can't choose, won't decide
Laugh in joy
Then laugh through your teeth
Smile, with the tears dripping down
Within a minute
All can change
The room spins, then shudders to a halt
Your eyes snap into focus
A new angle
Through the lense
It all looks different
And the pendulum keeps swinging.

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  • your angers a gift
    November 7, 2008

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    amazing write...I'm bi polar and this was well written to explain it...my favorite part was this

    "The pendulum swings
    Brings a smile to my face
    And tears to my eyes
    Can't choose, won't decide"

    great write...your an amazing writer! I'm a fan


  • daviscth silver member
    August 25, 2008

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    You did an awesome job describing this illiness. I have a step-grandson with it and your words fir him perfectally. Thanks for posting.


  • Dangerousparable silver member
    August 3, 2008
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    Oh my God I am so manic right nowo sleep is hard to come by

    But it's fun.....If I ever get organized


    • thearmsofsorrow
      August 25, 2008
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      hahah
      manic fits can be fun
      but im so sick of it all to be honest
      thanks for the comment


  • Angelflower
    May 25, 2008

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    This was really good..
    You really took the reader into this "situation"..
    I bet that this is a really hard thing to deal with in life.. Thank you very much for sharing this..
    Best of luck..

    Angel

    • thearmsofsorrow
      May 25, 2008
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      Thanks,
      I thought this was a really good contest btw


      • Angelflower
        May 25, 2008
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        I'm glad that you liked it.. I'll be doing something along the lines of this contest again.. Sometime soon


  • Burnt-Angel
    May 7, 2008

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    My older brother and one of my close friends are bi polar it is in my oppinion far worse then the plauge I was given, and it was a good write, good luck in the contest

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