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Hold on

Filling
Feeling
Closing your hand around a thought
Pull it tight

Draw in a breath
Release the pain
Crush the moment
Sifting through the shards
So much sand

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Kind of weird, but there is was, and I guess thats how it ends. It always feels good to write again.

hey, no fear, say what you like.

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  • crazymomma
    May 7, 2008
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    I have days where I wish I could crush my thoughts into sand. Good poem. Nice imagery