I'm freeing myself within love
You hold me as I surrender
But my mind is battling my heart
Can I really trust…
Really trust I will not be hurt again?
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my feelings atm
In a list
A contest entry
- Truth.. Quote Prompt.. by Angelflower.
713 points, ended May 25, 19 entries
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Can I really trust…
Really trust I will not be hurt again?
How many times have I asked the same question?! It seems like it's always on the mind as each relationship ends and new one begins. Life takes us through so many changes that we are left to wonder when to give in and when to hold back. They say to trust your heart but if that be true, why is common sense held within the head?
You did a great job here. Thank you for sharing and best wishes to you in all of your endeavors. Keep that pen handy and ever ready for use dear poet. 
♥ Touchof1der
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Aww.. This I can relate too.. The fear of the unknown really.. Trusting yet fearing that trust at the same time.. This really touched my heart.. You did a wonderful job with expressing yourself.. Great write..
Angel
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aahh the words spoken from the heart. I was in this very place 2 weeks ago. I took the chance.. no regrets. thats a hard question to answer. trust is hard thing. once its broken, trusting another seems harder than before.
I'm here for you, to talk to, to support you in anyway possible.
excellent poem that you have written, so much emotion jumps off the page.
good luck in the contest
mommy
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Such powerful words, and a hard place to be. Trust can be a difficult thing, I hope it all turns out well for you
Fantastic poem, superbly written. Good luck
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Short but powerful ^^
well as above says though this is a short poem its amnazing! and really powerful to your own emotions. And love is always worth the risk, aslong as the goddess above provides love in our lives we better take advantage of it, cause whatever is meant to be must be ^^ (i know how pagan do i sound there XD)
But seriously amazing poem, and if someone as gorgeous and amazing as you cant believe in love there is NO hope for me
Blessed be
Chris
XXX
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Awww darling...
I know the feelings your struggling with so well... and i understand how it is...
Trust is a big thing for me.. I dont take it lightly..and I dont give it freely... Sometimes I wonder if it holds me back from things...But sometimes, no matter how great someone is, or how wonderful they treat me...I just can't relax and trust... there's always that fear of being destroyed by broken trust again..
This is wonderful and straight from your heart. I love you, beautiful.
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It's a very hard thing to feel when you are not sure you can trust those around you... this is expressed with emotion right from your heart sweetie...
Always here for you..
Auntie
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