I've never been one who's been smitten
My vice is the couch that I sit in
And I'll not move my feet
Just to make you a seat
Good luck on a man who's commitin'.
Author notes
one of the seven deadliest
A contest entry
- What is your vice? Fun! by Lucy..
700 points, ended May 9, 2008, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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An interesting "slang" version of a limerick, I suppose, perhaps a limerick pour nos jours if I may be allowed to be sufficiently pretentious so to observe.
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My Vice
is putting up with humans
I hate them one and all
I await World War III
Where cats prevail; all humans fall
Tiki Cat
Buy Tiki's Gourmet Cat Food
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i love the title. really funny. the poem is great to.
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Cute. Happy trails
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Oh, no wonder you are proud of this poem, for it has such a heartwarming message and gave me a big >>>
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the fave game:
the title
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hahahhahahah so funny
shove over!!
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Well done and great rhyme... Hey, he should be on knees next to the couch anyway
Good luck in the contest...
Ken
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Great entry! Thank you.
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LOL I think I've met you somewhere before
Love, C
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Oh and God help you if it has a remote control to the TV hidden somewhere in it! LOL
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:)
God help us ALL if THAT's the case, yikes!
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