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Yum!

I could never give up eating candy,

It makes me feel fine and dandy,

To pick up a bar,

I don't have to go far,

And it's great with a cold glass of shandy.

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Shandy = beer and lemonade mixed together.

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  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    May 7, 2008

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    Now that's a yummmie in the making sweet tart and dandy...lol...thank you kindly for the smile and much luck in the contest


  • KayJay
    May 7, 2008

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    I think I see a pattern here... women = food; men = but I guess I don't have to say anymore (LOL). Very clever and nice write... Good luck in the contest.
    Ken


  • Cannonsfire
    May 7, 2008

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    Oh I do that all the time lol ooops that means I have more than one vice


  • Lucy.
    May 7, 2008
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    Yum! Great write, thanks for your entry!