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~*~Web Of Love~*~

I can't believe how we met
caught within the silk strands of the world wide web

Started as friends just innocent chat
little messages, jokes and laughs

Thoughts of you day and night
started to take up most of my time

Moments together turned to hours
as the connection within our souls blossomed and flowered

Sometimes I think it's all just a dream
I feel like I'm coming undone at the seams

My stomach flutters, gets tied in knots
I want to scream to the world I LOVE YOU lots

There's a passion inside that rages so deep
It binds us together makes us complete

I fall to sleep the sound of your voice in my ear
the warm beat of my heart keeping you near

No other love will ever compare
I want you to know I will always be there

You are my confidant, my lover, my friend
My love for you is infinite, it will never end

Author notes

Dedicated to Wayne
Darkest Love
Always & Forever
~sugar~ xxx

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    May 29, 2008
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    Lovely write here

    It is amazing how our bodies get all twiterpated when we get near someone we love


  • Swtpoetryman
    May 24, 2008

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    AS GOOD AS GOLD - TO ME!

    No other love will ever compare
    I want you to know I will always be there

    You are my confidant, my lover, my friend
    My love for you is infinite, it will never end.

    More than worthy of the silver trophy, Sugar - and from what I can see of SEXYGIRL5000 she will love again and be loved again in the blink of an eye - if you ask me (HE! HE!) for she is a very sexy girl just like me favorite British Vampire! Thanks SO MUCH for the heads up on this one, Baby - as I enjoyed it nearly as much as I enjoy your fine company whenever I am on AP!
    Peace & Love!
    Earl.


    • onesugar gold member
      May 24, 2008
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      You are such a ladies man LOL!!! and the person to help is you...you should enter with one of your heartwarming love poems.

      You are such a sweetie...DITTO! baby. I enjoy your company just as much when I am on AP.
      Thank you for your fab comment
      Always a pleasure
      Love you ~sugar~ xxx


  • baby5
    May 24, 2008
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    nice


    • onesugar gold member
      May 24, 2008
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      I hope it does the trick and helps you to love again.

      All the best
      ~sugar~

  • awwww very cute poem


  • Chanson belle
    May 9, 2008
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    very pretty
    it made me smile
    thanks for entering, good luck


  • Dark Otter
    May 7, 2008

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    How did I get here?

    I took a wrong turn somehow and ended up at this poem. This looks personal. Gotta check option #5. Michelle, I didn't know how close it is to you until I checked the comments. I'm glad your writing about the pain that helps with the healing. Take care, sweetness.

    • onesugar gold member
      May 7, 2008
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      How did you get here? I think you should have took a left instead of a right. LOL!!

      I'm alright Greg...always look forward to reading your comments. Valued and appreciated.
      Luv ~sweetness~ x

  • midnightblue1272
    May 7, 2008

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    Eerie

    This s just like how my lady love & I first met. Very eerie. It's as if you were writing about her & I. Great work, sis.


    • onesugar gold member
      May 7, 2008
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      Thank you bro for reading

      Always valued and appreciated

      ~sugar~


  • Xmjx
    May 7, 2008
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    Such a heart warming piece sugar I also notice that you improving on your rhyming Lv Mj

    • onesugar gold member
      May 7, 2008
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      Cheers nephew

      I try...sometimes it rhymes...sometimes it's a pain in the ass and doesn't.

      Thanks for reading...when is your next half term?

      just wondering when we are going to have a mad house again? LOL

      Take care,see you soon

      Love Shell xx

  • Love can be many things. It is weird how love can be so powerful that it even binds those that are hundreds - or thousands - of miles apart, together. This is a wonderful piece that is full of emotion about how you feel about this person.


    'No other love will ever compare
    I want you to know I will always be there'

    I love the part above, because it shows that you will always be there in the background no matter what. A shoulder to cry on methinks? I loved the whole feel of this piece. It is very very good indeed, and shows your love.

    Well done Sugar.
    Love
    Wayne Leon
    x

    • onesugar gold member
      May 7, 2008
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      Thank you sweetie, for your lovely comment.

      There are no limits where love is concerned ... it knows no bounds whether people are close by or thousands of miles away, you can always feel it in your heart...and yes you are right...I will always be there for him...no matter what life may present in the future...he will never be far away.

      Appreciate you reading as always

      Love ~sugar~ xx

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