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Know

a thousand miles away,
a chill bites deeper than imagined.
it can't be just the snow.

i bundle up,
but the efforts are futile.
this isn't a natural cold.

it feels dry,
almost like a desert in a sense.
when all the warmth goes

i feel tired,
like i'm suffering a weakness.
i feel...old.

this is wrong,
i've lived such a short life.
where did my youth go?

i see though,
the reason i've grown so quick.
just so i could know...know...know...nothing?

what is the knowledge that seemingly equates to nothing in this piece?

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  • queen Moderators member
    May 12, 2008

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    WELCOME TO ALL POETRY

    We all feel this way in our lives at one time or another Things that happen to us in our lives can age us quickly

    Barbara
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  • Angelflower
    May 7, 2008

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    I like this.. the imagery was well created with your words.. wonderfuL!! your flow was great and I really liked your idea behind this piece.. well done..

    Angel

  • Twilight Moon
    May 7, 2008
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    i like the idea of this..