Either You are sweet wise lies
or the warped truth, please.
“Please! - Please God ! I ask You now!To defy”
The sea,
part its nature and to tame it to submission beneath Your divine humble toes. “Please. - Please God! ” Defy this coming, - this ending part it clean and permit me to-to
rise above!
And,
cross impossible waters with my toes.
Permit me “this irrationality” - this insanity, and “
permit me to convert such improbability.
"Please! - Please God! I ask You now! PERMIT ME:”
To Give!,
To give what is not in nature for me to give. .
“Please! Please God! I ask You now!” Either you are sweet lies so wise or the warped truth
“ Please! - Please God! Permit me..” Permit me:
“ To give Her my smile, the warmth to keep Her warm when I can not,
and to give Her the strength to stand, when I can not hold her-”
I-I can’t not hold her -
My little girl my sweet, sweet baby,
remember these arms the gift in my last touch
“My little girl, my sweet, sweet baby”
Go to daddy.
Author notes
From a dream
A contest entry
- A TRIBUTE TO MOTHERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! by Talking Toni.
450 points, ended May 17, 2008, 35 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Parenthood by midnightblue1272.
500 points, ended July 24, 2008, 19 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Poetry, Poetry and PreWrites! by Lost Vampyre Angel.
1200 points, ended September 13, 2008, 339 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
thoughts? suggestions?
Comments
1 - 6 of 6
-
Hm...
That's very good images I got from that. I really like it. It have a nice flow. It's very good. I liked the give her a smile when I can not hold her. That was lovely
-
Wow!
This is unlike any poem I have ever read. I see this as a combination of prayers and persuasion to God. Very original & brilliant. Fine job, fellow poet.
-
So deep
I have to say everytime I read your poems your mind becomes much more interesting. To be so young yet write such deep and touching poetry makes one wonder why
-
-
picnic?
thank you.. maybe in the group survivors or else where
we could have "a meeting of the minds"(or a philosophical picnic XP) you seem to be a pretty fascinating individual yourself..going by your poems alone..
thank you
- Kas
-
-
Wow...............
AMazing just amazing written with such power and passion....Would make any mother burst with pride!!! Thanks for your entry and the best of luck in the contest!!!~~Toni!! -
WELCOME TO ALL POETRY
This is wonderful
Barbara
Site Greeter
Adding your comment:
1 - 6 of 6
