helpless romantic

I am a helpless romantic
caught in a world of blindness and shame.
Where the one I love
has control of my life
and twists and turns like a breeze.
The thoughts and meanings
come without trouble,
as love and fear fill the room.
What to do,
what to say,
how long to wait?
Is this a world
that is ready for those
who are hopeless romantics,
who urn for love
and excitement each day?

I believe now we shall fade away

because now's not the time

to let our guard down.

Author notes

why is it so hard?

Please tell me what you think

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By me, right now

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Silent Emotions
June 26, 2008

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sometimes we just cant help but be hopeless romantics especially if we care for someone. i really enjoyed reading this piece, it does flow really well and thank you for also commenting on my poem.
Mrs. Serial Killa
May 16, 2008
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Great work, the flow is good and i enjoyed it!