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My Name Be Kayla

 

That’s my brother over there,

all wheels and no legs,

when ever we're alone

I call him cripple;

 

‘cause he don't like it:

                   how peoples always be pretendin,

                          says, it's condescendin

                          and if he could walk,

                          he'd walk away.

 

See, we been together ~ forever

even in the womb…

Mama says,

that's where I took

more than my share;

'course,

I never did fret much

wastin time believin her…

I’m just damn sure

Danny doesn't hear.

 

It's a wonder, people

never listen what they say;

gliding down the halls

hitchin me a Danny-ride

slidin into third period,

we done discovered

laughter

much louder

than their whispers

lasting long

after high school tears.

 

Papa says,

it's about time

I be findin myself a man.

But boys ever only want one thing:

To be gettin me away from Danny;

they say it aint right,

he need

                take care of himself…

 

What?

A shelf

for an old book

nobody wants to read;

that's my brother over there!

 

Now we both knew

one day I'd be looking

at the better half of myself

lyin in a coffin;

 

some things

were meant to be ~

silent;

unbroken hearts love forever.

 

I just wish

I could understand

the movin forward

 

havin found

this half-a-life immobilized,

crippled

within the need for need.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

 

 

Prompt:


Personify Kayla

 

 

 

A contest entry

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Comments

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  • Congratulations on your shiny bronze. YAY! ~Pamela

  • This made me want to read it with a southern drawl like Forest Gump lol, I guess that is because it read like a movie that was being played out in my head. You have done this very powerfully and it is a moving story. I am glad to find it in my contest. Love, C

  • i love this.

  • I was a bit confused in parts but still it intrigued me. The format is good, helps make the reader pause and really take in each section. Good look in your contest.

    . Rewarded 4

  • Since I have read your other poems I realize how much you have stepped out of yourself to construct this story. I will have to read the contest instructions because I think of personification in terms of inanimate objects being given human traits. But in any case you have given life to an interesting, flawed but totally human character. Very nicely done. Peace, Liz

    . Rewarded 8

  • Excellent and heart felt write here

    I wrote a poem called Bobby Only Knew Love its about what you speak of here and how a young boy made it to the top and on his last day in school woke up the emotions of those who tormented him all those years he spoke out at graduation and even though they tried to hush him one person in the audience request to hear what he had to say .The link is http://allpoetry.com/poem/2896682

    . Rewarded 8


  • Euphoria
    May 8

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    I think you are sorry, selfish & pathetic. I feel sorry for you not your brother. You'll be prayed for. He doesnt need any prayers
  • JWGoethe
    May 8

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    Powerful, personal, and very touching. Expressed a full and sad story with mastery. Excellent on every level.

    . Rewarded 4

  • Well now I have given you...

    KAYLA
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