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Breaking Free

Leaping across molding bridges
Hurtling
    past
      technicolor
                starbursts
    rainbows
sketched
    in the whites of eyes
Somersaulting on freezing riverbeds
  Tumbling down hills
Free
  to
    be
Blown akimbo by
          gusts
Twirled  madly
Fearing  naught
Dancing    like
              no one
    can see you.

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  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    May 12, 2008

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    Oh yes...I love this kind of free fall...... I dance with brooms, with the little dog in my arms..and these days, with my granddaughter... dacning is something I am wont to do... ty for entering this....nicely done.