Silence is my enemy,
as I think about you.
Battling with my own mind.
with no noise to intervein.
Always struggling with my own thoughts,
I plead with the silence to subside.
The higher my thoughts raise in volume,
the silence follows.
When I can no longer stand the silence,
I turn on the stereo as loud as it goes.
Although the music is turned up high,
still my thoughts are louder.
The louder my stereo's volume goes,
the easier it is to tune out reality.
That's just the type of girl I am,
when thoughts of you consume my mind.
I can't hear anything outside my thoughts,
until I blare my stereo beyond recognition.
Reality being far too hard to face,
I just turn up the music.
Author notes
This isn't my best work but its from a cute quote. "I'm the type of girl...that turns up the music way loud, just to tune out reality"
In a list
A contest entry
- I'm the kind of girl/boy who.....(easy, creative, fun) by Stormy Sky.
400 points, ended June 3, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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it's a cute poem and i like it.
but i need your SN and Option number. Also, if you plan on entering on the option "i'm the kind of girl...." then please note that the limit is ten lines. -
the Truth
I can truly relate to this awsome poem
this stanza really got to me in an astonishing way:
When I can no longer stand the silence,
I turn on the stereo as loud as it goes.
Although the music is turned up high,
still my thoughts are louder.
simply outstanding write
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SO WHAT?
So what if it's not you so called "best work" is there really such a thing?
Ok, now to the poem. I liked it. It reminds me of what I'm going through rigt now. One guy wont leave my mind.
My first impression, scary true to me.
Keep Writing!
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