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The Choice . . .

Dreams or Realities?
A hard decision for some,
I think I'd choose the door...
Dreams!
Why?
Because Dreams take us anywhere...
And Dreams are happy Fairy Tales...
That we can write or rewrite
Where Reality can be a Dream,
 but
This world moves too fast
And its beauty passes us by!

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  • Desire gold member
    May 12, 2008

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: The Choice...
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and for some reason
    I was seeing Pippi Longstocking...which is one of
    my Favorite all time shows...
    but it feels like the experience, the travels the impossible becoming possible reference
    Hearing words: It is NOT too late
    Also for some reason seeing Willy Wonka too
    Love how You did the background~
    Wonderful images You have brought forth

    These lines grabbed and pulled~
    Because Dreams take us anywhere...
    And Dreams are happy Fairy Tales...
    That we can write or rewrite.
    Magnificent take on the prompt~

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~~*~



  • ucancallmereal
    May 7, 2008
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    awwh that was darling!!! I choose dreams too! you made the choice sound so easy, why doesnt everyone choose it?
    im just totally speechless, as always your poetry truly enlightens.. now i cant stop thinking about it!! marvelous as always dear keep it up =]

    i loved the background too btw