Rocky and harsh tread chaste feet
upon a material world,
where guileless hearts meet winters chills
and innocent eyes weep plaintively
in deep seated privation of the soul.
In true inner self searching
are steps steady and sure,
goals and hopes along life's path
a liberating vision.
With faith intimate dreams triumph.
Author notes
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In a list
A contest entry
- ~* Dreams or Reality *~ by Desire.
700 points, ended May 12, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Door To Fulfillment
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and for some reason
I was seeing a lava lamp~
Now with this lava lamp...I'm hearing word: meditating
but also words: a need to...daily stressors...wrecking havoc hearing phrase: a train wreck waiting to happen...being shown a baby-small child...
but looks more like a doll~ whether a real baby or
a desire to have one...being shown this
yet reference to taking a Mental Break...
hearing word: Cancun
Curious images You have brought forth
These lines grabbed and pulled~
In true inner self searching
are steps steady and sure,
goals and hopes along life's path
a liberating vision.
Magnificent take on the prompt~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~~*~
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