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[ All I need ]

All I need
Is another smoke
Whipe the tears
From my face
And laugh
As I choke

Drown in the misery
Of a thousand crashing
Years
The scars may be gone
But the pain
Is still here

Take a bullet to
The brain
Feel a little relief
As the person
In question
Is pulled out of me

Drown in the misery
The pain is
still fresh
A single eyed monster
Who reaps like
The Dead

Burn my conviction
I plead that
it's not fair
The convict in
question
Is right over there

Looking at you
He's looking at
Me
With shadows
for his flesh
Daggers for his
Teeth

A blood wanted
demon
A thorn in my
Side
A memoir to the
writers
I think I've
written the last
line


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  • SaviDropKick.Oi.
    May 7, 2008
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    i love it! is it prewritten tho?


    • Cr187
      May 7, 2008
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      aahh, no, sry, i thought that it was for new poems