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Tell Me This Is Not Reality

The volume isnt going up any louder.
Why wont it increase the noise
to drown out the sound in the next room?
I cant take this one more night,
all the screams
all the fights-
why wont the nightmare end??
Why cant I wake up,
and be in her arms?
But thats the dream
and this is reality...

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the only positive things are

-Gabby(Main)
-We're moving

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  • Desire gold member
    May 12, 2008

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: Tell Me This Is Not Reality
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and for some reason
    while reading several times, kept seeing that scene
    in movie: Stay Alive where in the beginning part the
    couple is in the bedroom while one character is downstairs playing the game which sadly ends in tragedy Feels like a reference to nightmare~but being shown words: change will come, must be patient
    force it and I'm being shown consequences...
    like going against what You *feel* is the right thing to do, instead can make something happen that is not meant to happen yet, not advantageous if that makes any sense
    Curious images You have brought forth

    These lines grabbed and pulled~
    I cant take this one more night,
    all the screams
    all the fights-
    why wont the nightmare end??.
    Magnificent take on the prompt~

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~~*~