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Unclear Choices

 

Not all can conceive what others easily can

small problems can muddle the simplest plan

 

Choices to make can cause uncertainty

quick decisions become a necessity

 

Better to go ahead even if you are wrong

than stand still until the urgency is gone

 

Mistakes can be forgiven in times of need

so for your own sake go ahead and proceed

 

 

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  • Desire gold member
    May 12, 2008

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: Unclear Choices
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and after reading
    several times for some reason I kept getting word:
    car repair...seeing tires~like a nail or something that
    appears to look like a nail and hearing Michelin
    Now I am not advertising for the company, but was
    getting that word~ also hearing like a reference to
    the girl looking like Shirley Temple
    and how adorable~Love the rhyme too~
    Oh~ believe it or not I was hearing word: NutriSystems (now I am getting hungry)
    Wonderful images You have brought forth

    These lines grabbed and pulled~
    Mistakes can be forgiven in times of need
    so for your own sake go ahead and proceed.
    Magnificent take on the prompt~

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~~*~


  • June-bug
    May 9, 2008

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    This is awesome. For one must do the best with what they have and if they stumble just pick themselves up and move on. Enjoyed this very much so full of hope and just the simple facts that remind one they are human.


  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    May 7, 2008

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    I think you have a good point here...but sometimes it's hard to move on after a wrong decision...and sometimes people or surroundings keep you reminding of that mistake...
    Well...I'm sure a lot of truth is written here...

    Great take on the prompt and a picture that goes so well with it....

    Good luck in this contest
    XXJeannette

    (btw...I first thought it was a girl picking the lady's or the mens roombut that was before I read the plates on the door)


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    May 6, 2008
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    A lot of wisdom in this write.


  • Sgt B
    May 6, 2008

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    Be careful of what's behind the door..

    You might just get what you want . Very thought provoking write.
    I could imagine all kinds of things coming out behind the portal opened.
    Great job. I really liked reading this one.
    Thanx for sharing it.
    ~Ron~


  • Quiet places
    May 6, 2008

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    Excellent!!

    Love the message behind the message. Some very wise thinking went into this one. Enjoyed it much. Don

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