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the worst have it best

not a part
not a part
not a part
of attention takers

i make the beauties
hate the
beauties covered in shame

i suffer in my blankets
and write in plain form

knowing exactly
what i am not        a part
of.

discretion and hidden
ammunitions.. regression
and shared depressions

i
i
i
alone... am- --

the isolation
a sweet killing, the pain
carry me to the next
lesson. distract me now

distract me now..

my freak let out
wanders about
oh why don't i let you
see it
see it

surpress it
press it
never you
        never
had a chance

never with the beauty face
did i try to take
what belonged..

and now i pay
in silence

wish to hate
and be the sin i hate in myself
just for some significance.

look beyond this..
i am better than no one

just wish
to move you..
but i could never give more
than a writing utensil.


Author notes

             swing..                     

                              swing..

 

       mood
                                                 

swings

ha. i'm sick and wrote an odd little thing.
but ah, no one cares.

hope you had a nice day.

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  • lowercase prelude gold member
    May 7, 2008

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    this was cleverly written. i liked the poem's structure and how you wrote it. as for content, i can sorta see some egotism (i.e. the first two stanzas).