today i woke up with those same sweet thoughts in my mind
but you weren't there... i woke up and had nothing to find
i turned to where you use to lay
but you weren't there.... but i waited to hear you say
good morning my love
but nothing happen...i didn't hear your voice, sweet as a dove
i waited all day, for you to come back
i waited and waited... trying to forget what i lack
things she had... that i never could
the reasons why you don't want me anymore...
and the reasons why you should
I love you more then she does... for this i am sure
I've loved you all my life, a sweet little curse
i finally found the cure
and then she came along, and i was infected again
with jealousy
but this time i am dawned with curiosity
of how you could love anyone but me
i showed you what i had, i showed you my heart
i told you i loved you, and you said forever
and never shall we part
but forever makes cry
and it made me cry one more time
then you looked into my tearful eye
and sat there and lied once more
i should have known it would be like before
but jealously blinds me
and i thought your love made me see
curiosity killed my heart
and now i have to restart
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Written December 19th, 2003
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good morning my love
if you think long and hard about it, those words actually are what keep relationships together, without those they would be dead. Jealousy in life can be ridden of if you make others jealous of you lol thats the only way, no matter what it is thats the only answer.then jealousy is dead just like the love in this piece, well not the love but the love you have had for this person seems to be decaying towards the end to me anyways. This i have personally not had to put up with but if i was you in this id a whacked the hell of the bitch and made sure he knew. Stuff what the guy thinks lol it should be you in nhis arms.
Great write
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Emotional. Touching. I've experienced the same thing. Bought back painful memories for me. Good job.
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