according to katie
life adds up to one thing:
a-n-o-r-e-x-i-a
according to leslie
life adds up to two things:
b-u-l-i-m-i-a
a-n-o-r-e-x-i-a
according to bella
life adds up to three things:
e-x-e-r-c-i-s-e
b-u-l-i-m-i-a
a-n-o-r-e-x-i-a
well...
it won't stop
you think you're at the top
it makes you blind
you think that you are kind
you soon won't breathe
if you don't take the sword
out of it's sheathe...
try to breathe
A contest entry
- She's Got A Body Like An HourGlass And Its Ticking Like A Clock--x by Dead Star--x.
475 points, ended May 12, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Eating Disorder Picture Inspired by Manda Kathryn.
900 points, ended July 27, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
disorders... it's a disease
Comments
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I am very unsure what Johnny Depp or pirates have to do with this poem but it is fanastic; it looks so simple but then I felt ... something like sadness but more intense as I can almost hear those words being whispered from one girls mouth to another trying to convience her that this is it, this is how you are meant to live your life.
Powerful!
♥
Thank you & Best of luck
Stay safe
~Manda
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1st: johnny depp is hot
2nd: he plays a pirate
3rd: pirates have swords
4th: it looks awesome
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i like the tone
& johnny depp♥
but i do like the last stanza
♥
Dead Star--x
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