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Paint,
  your stony exterior to perfection,
littered with the blush of innocence
you don't even have.

Such perfect hate,
  for everything and everyone
because they made you into this beast,
broke you down into this monster.

Such a lovely exterior,
  such a deadly interior.

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Fiery temperatures in ice box faces.

Be harsh, be specific.

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  • penman gold member
    May 7, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.


  • crimsondew
    May 6, 2008
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    Great take on the quote chosen...All the best!