Quickly I supplied you
with me
and told you to
be ready.
To unwrap
and to begin
unfolding
all of your desires
holdings.
Prepared in seams of
hued lace
we were
relentless.
In initiating the want to be
disgraced
by our own
innocence.
Validating
actions first lead
by
false need.
Equipped with intelligence
yet still surrendering
to our flesh
at
light speed.
We
embellished in desires
originally released
by want.
And
drowned in thirst as
passion decreased
by life's
inept taunts.
We
fell for what was
devoid
of truth.
Arrested in the moment
we didn't see the
expressing of a
rushed
youth.
Soon
curiosity was company
no more
but guilt
lingered
long.
As regret bade welcome
and whispered
that it
was our destiny
all along….
Please tell me what you think
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deep...intense....passionate
needless to say i like it. its like watchin a skit in someones music video or somethin lol -
wow!!
wow!!
wow!!
this was the best poem ive read in a while!!
well done
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daaaaamn blacc
wow. u sick w/it. "as regret bade welcome and whispered that it was our destiny all along" lol i like dat. "equipped with intelligence yet still surrenderin to our flesh" go head blacc!!! lol dats wussup
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A.M.A.Z.I.N.G.
That's all I need to say about this beautiful piece of poetry!
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WHAT???!!!!!!!!! Girl, this here is GOLDEN. Poetry at it's best. Expressing deep sentiments of personal, masterful proportions. This is EXCEPTIONAL. It just flowed like wine, this piece. I really enjoyed this. I was definitely feeling the vibe and the honesty of this piece. - cgirl0410
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Thanks girl! You know Im happy that you liked it. Between you and secberm ya'll inspired me and got me out of that writer's block. lol So I thank you for that.
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"We
fell for what was
devoid
of truth.
Arrested in the moment
we didn't see the
expressing of a
rushed
youth.
Soon
curiosity was company
no more
but guilt
lingered
long.
As regret bade welcome
and whispered
that it
was our destiny
all along…."
WOW!! I loved the ending. This is a very deep poem with a lot of message that needs to be read and understood. Some may have to read it often to get it and then to remind them.
Excellent poem. I'm glad I stumbled onto you. I saw you on a comment to Secberm.
One Love,
John
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Well now, lil sister. LOVE to see you back.
Mrs. Florida Evans. 
Love the flow, sweets. What inspired this? Write on. One.
Dez
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