I know that you know I’m upset,
I’m not in the mood to do anything you want me to,
Now you’re mad at me and I feel my heart is bleeding,
My emotions are screwed up and this makes it worse,
I don’t know what to do any more,
I’m dying inside and it’s a slow unwanted pain,
My nerves are shot and I’m shacking like crazy,
Thinking “what did I do wrong to disserve this?”
I’ve been stabbed in the back by others and you,
I trusted you with all I had,
Now my heart bleeds and there’s no way to stop it,
I want to talk before it’s too late,
PLEASE work with me?
Author notes
this goes with option 8
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I really liked this but you had a few spelling mistakes...
Thanks for entering
Miss Ciara ann -
A sad, emotional, and great write. I liked line 11 best. Well done, thank you and good luck in the contest.
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what a sad but poweful write, i like that there is some hope at the end when you are asking for help, best of luck in the contest
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wow
Great poem. I love how it explains so many emotions and so much pain. I really like line 11. That really stood out in your poem. Good luck in the contest -
Good Job. I love the emotion throught the poem. Good luck in the contest.
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