Every time you ignore my words,
chunk of me
is alloted
to darkness
agonizing forever,
still you fail to see
embers sizzling bright
in eyes.
My silence
screaming to your closed ears.
Irrevocable decision,
no more smiling,
for it hurts.
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A contest entry
- Quicky Prompt - PIF - 40 words by CarolDesjarlais.
525 points, ended May 12, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Man we use a great deal of energy clenching our lips.
Thank you for entering....
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You are welcome!
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Your dark side is coming along so well!!
Screams an inner pain and being ignored... I can again relate!!
Wonderful write, good luck!
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Thank you so much! You were my main inspiration to plunge in the dark side!
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good
i lik it!
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Thank you!
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