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So she....

So shes uneducated
in things well known
So she has no idea
How or what shes shown
So she can sense confusion
But then again, thats it
So she cant stand illusions
So shadowed and unlit
So she can guess she loves him
But she dosent know for sure
But if its true she loves him
Then maybe its a lure
She she can only hide from
The many things unknown
So she can sense she loves him
She sighs, lets out a moan

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  • brightsmylesxx
    May 7, 2008

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    This is good! in the line: "She she can only hide from"
    you wrote she twice. And in the line "So she cant stand illusions" You need an apostrophe in can't. But those are just little grammatical things this really is an awesome poem!

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