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My Rich Jewel

Your sparkling eyes like melted gold,

And shimmering bronze hair rich enough for a king.

Cool marble skin as soft and hard as white alabaster,

Your scent of honey so sickly sweet

I fear loving you, lest I gain addiction to your perfection.

You are a shimmering, unbreakable diamond,

The graceful songbird that soothes me,

The blazing sun that warms me

And yet the one that I do not deserve.

Author notes

Yet another assignment for school. We had to use our "colorful" figures of speech.
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I'm not really sure why I keep writing these love poems though.
I just know I keep liking the way they turn out. Do you like them too?

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