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There once was a guy

There once was a guy
who would deny
everything you said
and sometimes you would feel a little dead
He would laugh at you
and boo and boo
until you felt mad
and he said one day to a boy named Chad
"I bet you feel glad"
"You bet I do!For my dad showed me this ad"
he replied
"For my dad had applied"
the little old man scoffed
the boy went on to buy that Microsoft
that he saw in that ad that day
and the guy ran away
never to be heard from
for he dumb!

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  • Autumn Rain13
    October 18, 2008
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    lol, nice... and funny, keep writing!!!!!!!!!


    • SmartBrick
      October 18, 2008
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      based off a 'stupid' if you will kid.ugg,I do NOT like him at all!


  • SilverWolf
    June 30, 2008
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    wow that was awesome!


  • piratehearts57
    May 21, 2008
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    lol nice


  • nichtmich silver member
    May 7, 2008

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    Wonderful rhyming skills, although the 'Chad' part sounds a little forced, IMO. A really good story, but I got confused at the end, LOL!

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