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frothy ocean waves

frothy ocean waves
crash upon the sandy shore
quickly they flow back
to reform and crash once more
churning again and again

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A contest entry

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  • crazymomma
    May 7, 2008
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    Great imagery! It really makes me wish I didn't live in Indiana.


  • Samplette gold member
    May 7, 2008

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    A nicely done tanka. I like the picture your words paint for me. Maybe you mean quickly instead of quiskly? Thank you for entering the contest.
    Sam